Thursday, March 6, 2014

Choices by Kate Vale Excerpt

BLURB:
Melanie Holmes has her hands full when 15-year-old Keith and 13-year-old Anne, react badly to Melanie’s impending divorce from their father. Only four-year-old Jeffrey is his usual sunny self.
Further complicating her life is her attraction to Sam Hudson, the detective called to her home when Ken runs off, and Anne is abducted from a strip club.

Sam is forced to confront his own demons as he contemplates becoming deeply involved with Melanie’s family after she is seriously injured in the same car accident that kills her ex-husband. After she returns home, Melanie’s kids tell her they want to marry Sam, even though he hasn’t uttered the “M” word.

How will Sam react when her kids do the proposing for him? Can the long-time bachelor commit himself to her and her children?

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The next day, Melanie sat on the couch reading a book after a brief walk in the park, her first without Sam. She looked up when Keith and Anne brought chairs close to her and sat down. Jeffrey cuddled next to her.
“We’re calling a family meeting,” Keith stated.
Anne nodded in agreement.
Jeffrey echoed his older brother. “A family meeting.”
“What about?” Melanie asked.
Anne whispered, “Tell her, Jeffrey.”
“We want to marry Sam.” He beamed at her.
“Jeffrey!” Anne and Keith exclaimed in unison.
“You said it wrong.” Anne frowned. “He meant we want you to marry Sam.”
Melanie’s pulse picked up speed and she opened her mouth to say something, but Anne continued.
“He loves you and he loves us and we love him, so why don’t you two make it official so he can stay?” She blushed and began pulling at her braid.
Jeffrey patted Melanie’s hand to get her attention. “He sleeped here the whole time you were in the hospital and he made dinner and everything. He tucks me in at night, just like a dad is s’posed to. He made me feel safe, even when I was scared when you weren’t here.” He wiped a hand across his plump cheek. “And he even showed me his gun and told me why he keeps it locked up so we can’t be hurted.”
“Mom,” Keith said. “We couldn’t have made it without him. He even talked to Evelyn a couple more times—after I talked to her. One time, it was late at night and I could tell he was really mad that she wouldn’t help out.”
Melanie imagined what Evelyn must have said, and how Sam would have reacted. “I need to talk to Sam about this, kids.” She felt her cheeks warm, pleased that her children were no longer a barrier between her and Sam. But he hadn’t asked her. Did he want what the children wanted?
“He took us to his new house,” Anne rattled on. “It’s really big. Sam said he was thinking of making this big old attic space into a room just for us to play in. Crystal says it would be really cool to have a slumber party there, with all those windows that look out so high off the street.”
Keith shuffled in his chair, looking like he wanted to talk, but Anne waved him off.
“It’s got a really neat kitchen, too, and a big pantry. You’d like it. We want to live there. All three of us. With Sam.” After a brief pause, she appended, “And you.”
“But we already have a house, honey,” Melanie replied, her heart in her throat, her entire body having come down with a case of the battling butterflies.
“But this is Dad’s house,” Keith said. “We were thinking you wouldn’t want to stay here.”
The squeak of the laundry room door closing announced someone’s presence. Melanie looked toward the kitchen. Sam was leaning against the counter, his gaze blanketing her in lov-ing warmth. How long had he been standing there? What had he heard?
“Hi, Sam,” Keith said. “We’re having a family meeting.”
“Is it private, or may I sit in?” His voice had that mellow whisky tone that heated her to her toes.
“We told Mommy about your new house,” Jeffrey added.
“Good.” He cleared his throat. “I’m moving my stuff in next week. Would you guys like to come over for dinner after I’m set up?” His words were for everyone, but his gaze never left Melanie’s face.
Jeffrey clambered off the couch and reached for Sam’s hand as he walked closer. “You sit here, next to Mommy. I told her what we all voted. It was nannamous. It means we all agreed, even though I got to say it.”
“Jeff,” Keith warned. “Let Mom talk.”
Sam’s gaze slid from one child to the next before settling on Melanie’s face again and remaining there, a wary kind of hope in his eyes. “What exactly did you guys vote on?”
“Jeffrey—” Anne said, raising a finger to her mouth, but it was too late.
“We want to marry you,” Jeffrey declared, his expression joy-ful. “So you can be my new daddy.”
Melanie couldn’t stop staring up at Sam.
When Jeffrey pulled on his hand once more, Sam lowered himself onto the couch, one knee grazing hers as he sat down. “Jeff. Will you please bring me my jacket? It’s on the bench near your cubby in the laundry room.”
“’Kay.” Jeffrey retrieved the garment and trotted back with it.
“Thank you, son.” Sam shoved a hand into the jacket pocket. “I guess this is a good a time as any, since you all voted. And it was unanimous.”
Sam grasped Melanie’s hand. “You know what I told the doc-tors and, you know why. I should have asked you first. I’m sorry I didn’t. Lou said I got things backward.”
He pulled out a small black velvet box. He opened it, slid off the couch, and went down on one knee, no longer caring that the children were present.
“Sam, did you hurt your leg?” Jeffrey asked.
Anne shushed him, pulled Jeffrey onto her lap and slid a hand over his mouth.
“I’ve been carrying this around with me since that Fourth of July party.” Sam gave a wry little chuckle. “And I was going to do this later tonight without an audience”—he glanced briefly at each of her children—“but they’re part of you, your family, too. And they voted.” He cleared his throat, and his eyes seemed to glow as he gazed at her. “And, who am I—” he choked, his voice suddenly husky— “to challenge a unanimous vote?”
His eyes had that heated quality that turned her insides into gooey chocolate.
“Will you marry me, Melanie? I love you and want to live with you and take care of you and be your husband—”
Jeffrey clapped his hands. Anne clamped his hands between her own. “Ssh!”
“I love your kids. I want to help you raise them. Can you see your way clear to allowing me that privilege?”
Melanie’s throat was so tight she wasn’t sure she could speak. Instead, she squeezed his hand and nodded. Then, she swallowed and croaked, “I’d like that a lot.”
Jeffrey slid off Anne’s lap. Both stood up and gave each other a high-five.
Keith beamed. “Way to go, Sam.”
Melanie looked at the ring that sparkled up at her in its black velvet nest. “Will you put it on my finger, Sam?”
He nodded and kissed her.
“This is so romantic,” Anne crooned.
“Yippee! Yippee!” Jeffrey shrieked as he bounced in circles around the room.
“Let’s go see your house again,” Melanie murmured when Sam reached over and hugged her. “Our house. Where we’re all going to live.”
“As soon as we’re married.” Sam finished her thought.

He helped her off the couch and followed the kids to his car.


BIO:
Kate Vale lives in the beautiful fourth corner of northwestern Washington state. She enjoys the slower pace of a small city located between Vancouver BC, and Seattle WA. Her stories reflect the many different careers she has experienced and the crises that confront real men and women. Helping her characters get to a happily-ever-after is a continuing goal.
Awards received:
2014 Great Beginnings* 1st prize for DREAM CHASER (the first novel I published) – in cozy mysteries for Romantic Fiction

2014 Great Beginnings* 1st prize for HER DAUGHTER’S FATHER (this comes out on Feb 10, 2014!) – in Romantic Suspense category

Previously, PACKAGE DEAL won 1st prize in Romantic Suspense Category for books published in 2012

In addition to the 2013 1st prize for Contemporary Romance for CHOICES

*All four of these awards were given by Chanticleer Books and Media. The Great Beginnings contest was for the first up to 1500 words only. According to the people running the contest, their intent was to identify titles whose beginnings “captured” the reader, urging them to want to read more.  The other two contests required submission of the entire novel.

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Ernie pried open the locked door of the grocery and he and Cal entered. Keith followed them. Ernie headed straight for the cash register. Cal detoured to the front of the counter and began stuffing candies in one pocket.
“You guys should just leave. It’s not right what you’re doing.” He’d have to call the cops now. Maybe he’d leave a message, an anonymous tip. But when he turned around, the black detective stood in the doorway, his bulk blocking the light from the outside motion detector, his gun drawn. “Hold it right there, boys.”
Calvin jerked at the sound of the detective’s voice, looked over his shoulder at the tall black man and dashed for the front door, opened it and took off running across the street. Keith froze, stunned at how quickly the big police officer reached him. Ernie ran after Calvin, still holding the crowbar, but a white detective grabbed him by the collar of his shirt and pulled him to an abrupt halt just outside the front door.
“Drop it, kid,” Sam Hudson ordered. The crowbar Ernie had been holding clattered onto the sidewalk. He stuttered, “Wasn’t my idea.” He pointed at Keith. “He told me to do it—he knew no one was here.”
“Hey! No! That’s not right,” Keith protested, but the black officer snapped handcuffs around his wrists.
“Wait. No. I just …” Keith’s pulse raced and he felt like he had to pee. What was his mom going to say? She’d been so proud of him getting his job, his first-place science project. Espe-cially after he’d apologized for being so nasty ever since his dad had left. Would Tamara fire him? What if he went to jail? But he hadn’t done any-thing. Why had Ernie accused him?
The black detective placed Keith in the back of the squad car. Ernie crouched on the other side of the back seat, his cuffed hands behind his back.
Keith looked over at Ernie, who was sniffling. He was crying? Keith turned away from the boy, disgusted. “Shut up, Ernie. Stop acting like a baby.”
But he didn’t shut up. As soon as the detectives climbed in the front seat, Ernie began babbling about how it was Keith’s idea to break into the grocery, that he knew what was in there, that Ivy had told him.
“Got anything to add, Keith?” The black detective asked from the driver’s seat.
“It’s not true. Ivy didn’t tell me a thing.” No way was he going to put the blame on her. He slumped next to the door, debating with himself about telling the detectives about Calvin, that it was all Ernie and Cal’s doing, breaking the motion detector light and robbing the store. But he didn’t dare rat on the bigger boy, especially after what he’d said about Anne and Ivy.
The ride downtown was punctuated by static-interrupted radio pronouncements Keith couldn’t understand. The black detective escorted him inside while the white detective kept his hand on Ernie’s arm as they approached the building. The white detective motioned to two men. Their name tags identified them as detention officers. They followed Keith and Ernie into a room. “Come on in here, you two,” a pudgy man with sparse sandy hair said.
“One of you at this end of the table,” the skinny man with red hair pointed.
Keith sat down, glad the man removed his cuffs. He rubbed his hands where the cuffs had bitten into his wrists. Ernie glared at the stout man who sat down across the table from him and ran one hand over his head.
“Hey, Archie,” he asked Ernie. “How long has it been since you were here last?”
“You’re thinking of my cousin. It wasn’t me. Someone who looks like me,” Ernie whined. The man’s double-chin wiggled when he laughed. “Right, and I’m not Santa Claus at Christmas-time. Sam, what’s the charge this time?”
Detective Hudson rubbed his neck before replying. “Breaking and entering, theft, and malicious mischief. Maybe more, but that’ll do for now.”
“It wasn’t me! Go talk to Archie—he’s always in trouble.” Ernie’s voice rose into a whine. “You’ve got no proof. We didn’t do nothin’!” The whites of his eyes gave his face a skeletal look that made Keith want to puke.
“Since Archie’s been here before, he probably told you how it works down here, Ernie. I’m gonna call your folks. Give me their numbers.”
“Only got one.”
“Which one—your dad or your mom?”
“My aunt.” Ernie muttered. “But she don’t care about me.”
“Does she feed you?”
“Yeah.”
“Then she cares. What’s her number?”
Ernie mumbled it and the detention officer helped him out of the chair. “Okay. I’ll call her. Time to find you a bed.” Keith looked over his shoulder as Ernie was led out of the room and disappeared down a hall, continuing to complain loudly that they had the wrong person.
The other detention officer rapped his knuckles on the table. “Pay attention, Keith,” he said after checking the brief report the white detective handed over. “Look at me.”
Keith’s pulse raced. “Do I have to stay here? I didn’t do anything.”
“You were brought in with Ernie. That means you did plenty.”
“Yep. Ol’ Ernie sang like a canary in springtime,” the black detective confirmed.
“Your first time here?” the detention officer asked.
Keith nodded. “Don’t I get a phone call?”
“You watch too much TV. This isn’t a police station. You’re at the county detention center. I’ll do the calling. Give me your parents’ number.”
Keith’s stomach clutched. “If I tell you, can I go home?”
The man’s grin did not extend to his eyes. “That’s not how this works. You’re a guest of the county until Sunday afternoon, when you get out on bail—assuming your folks pay. Not before.”
“How much is it?”
“Depends on the charge.” The detention officer seemed to be rubbing the creases in his forehead again, as if he had a headache. Keith couldn’t take his eyes off the scar that began between the man’s thumb and first finger and ran past his wrist, disappearing into the cuff of his shirt sleeve.
“Sam, enlighten me here.”
“Same as the other kid for now,” the detective replied, his eyes on Keith’s face.
“Okay. Bail will probably be five hundred.”
Keith sucked in his breath. His dad didn’t have that kind of money and he wasn’t even sure his dad would get him out. The last two times they’d talked hadn’t been pleasant. Then he’d been a no-show for the Science Fair. His dad had warned him not to get into trouble. He had to be a good example for Jeffrey, he had to help his mom take care of Anne. And his mom? She was going to f**king freak.
“Can you call a lawyer instead? I’m a minor. Aren’t I supposed to have a lawyer present for questioning?”
Lou snorted.
Keith had forgotten the detectives were still in the room.
“Don’t you listen?” The man grimaced in a way that fed Keith’s anxiety. “This is not Law and Order. Give me your parents’ number.” He sat back in the chair, crossed his fat arms over his chest and waited.
When Keith showed no sign of talking, he continued. “Okay. Time for the facts of life. I’m going to call your folks and tell them where you are. Then you’re going to be fingerprinted.”
“Already been. And I didn’t do anything,” he replied, flexing his fingers in his lap.
“Doesn’t matter. After that, you’ll have a shower and we’ll give you some clothes to wear—not quite as nice as yours, but they’ll do. Then we’ll take you to a cell. You’ll sleep here tonight, or if you don’t want to sleep, you can think about what you’ve done—”
“I told them to stop. They wouldn’t listen. Ernie’s wrong. He’s the one who did it, along with—” He caught his breath, afraid to say anymore, remembering Calvin’s threats.
“Along with who?” The detectives seemed to perk up where they lounged against the wall on a bench near the door.
Keith said nothing.
The other man repeated, “Give me your folks’ phone number.”
“You can call my mom.” He took a deep breath. “Will you tell her I’m not bleeding or dead or anything so she doesn’t go crazy?”
“I’ll tell her you’re fine. She can see you on Sunday—before she posts bail.”
“Not till then? What if she doesn’t have the money?”
“Then you’ll stay here longer—until you go to court.”
Keith groaned under his breath. Why had he gone out the back way instead of the front? Why had he decided to see what those guys were doing instead of going home? If only he’d minded his own business.
The man reached for the phone on a nearby table and dialed the number. “Mrs. Holmes? This is Garth Laudenbach. I’m at the County Detention Center. Your son, Keith, was brought in this even-ing. No, he’s not hurt, but the police—” Keith could hear sounds but not the words she must be saying—“yes, the charge is breaking and entering and theft.”
His mother must have interrupted him with questions, because the man glanced over at Keith before continuing.
“You can see him on Sunday during visiting hours. One to three.” He stopped talking again. “No, you can’t talk to him. Let me explain. His bail will probably be set at five hundred dollars. You can get him out by paying ten percent of that amount when you see him on Sunday. Then he’ll have to come back for his court appear-ance—” He looked like he’d heard whatever she was saying many times before. “No, he’s not hurt. He’s fine. He’ll be in a cell by himself. Thank you, Mrs. Holmes.”
“She freaked, didn’t she? I’ll bet she’s really mad.” Keith felt like he was going to hurl.
“You didn’t exactly make her day. Come on. Let’s get things started.”
Keith rose and was escorted to a room where a man finger-printed him. Then he was walked down a long hall.
Keith felt numb with fatigue and the shock of all that had happened in the past hour. He wasn’t surprised when they took his cell phone, emptied his pockets into a plastic bag and placed it and the rest of his clothes into another bag. The officer, sounding bored, told him it would be placed in a locker, that he would get his possessions back after bail was paid. The clothes he wore after the shower didn’t fit very well, but what made him shiver more than the cold water of the shower was the way the officer had watched him after he’d stripped. He clutched at the waistband of his pants, a bit too short but much too big in the waist. If he didn’t hang on to them, he was sure they would fall past his knees. The bed didn’t look all that comfortable and, when he lay down, all he could think about was what his mother would say to him when she saw him on Sunday.
He knew he’d never fall asleep in this place with the concrete block walls and the weird sounds that came from other cells along the hall. He didn’t know where Ernie was. Cal had run away before the cops could grab him. He was free even though he’d been the one who’d really done everything. It wasn’t fair.

Keith pulled the roughened woolen blanket around his shoul-ders. His mom had said she would take him downtown to get his learner’s permit next week. For sure that was never going to happen. His life was over. He rolled onto his side and faced the wall, ignoring the tears that puddled under his chin.

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