Sliding Past Vertical
by Laurie
Boris
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BLURB:
Sarah
Cohen is a walking disaster. She means well, but the ex-diver’s hasty decisions
wreak havoc on her life in Boston. Good thing Emerson is a phone call away in
Syracuse, with a metaphorical mop to clean up the mess. Their long-distance
friendship can be excruciating for him, though. Years after they shared a brief
college romance, he’s still in love with her. When everything goes wrong, Sarah
takes another plunge: back to the scene of her last mistake, to start fresh.
Unfortunately for Emerson, the move puts her too close for comfort. Her
attempts to straighten her life’s trajectory are sometimes amusing and
sometimes catastrophic. With Sarah around, is anyone safe?
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Excerpt
Jay wasn’t
answering the phone or the door buzzer, although she knew he was home and
alive: his car sat in front of his apartment building and changed parking spots
every day or so, which she couldn’t imagine had happened of its own accord. So
the only avenue Sarah had to elicit any kind of reaction to his no-show on the
waterfront was his answering machine. She left what she considered angry
messages. They were ineffective. She then opted for a softer approach—by that
time, she really was worried about him. When this didn’t work, she tried
silence. Perhaps a few days of guilt stew would provoke some contrition.
It was nearly
a week before she saw or heard from him again.
Her birthday
fell during that week. Everyone else remembered. Emerson sent red roses with
his usual mushy card—a tradition he kept up since she’d graduated from the
university and moved to Boston, eight years ago. For the first five years,
Sarah had a counter-tradition of her own. She’d have a short panic attack in
the back room of the Copy King, followed by a serious case of the creeps for
the rest of the afternoon, interspersed with calls to her roommate to debate
the symbolism of red roses. Later, over a beer or two and a lot of convoluted
rationalization, she’d convince herself that perhaps she’d read too much into a
bunch of stupid flowers and a heartfelt birthday greeting from her
old-lover-now-platonic friend.
Then she’d
call to scold him for having spent too much on her.
“I had a good
month,” he’d say.
Somehow, July
always happened to be a good month.
AUTHOR Bio and Links:
Laurie Boris
is a freelance writer, editor, proofreader, and former graphic designer. She
has been writing fiction for over twenty-five years and is the award-winning
author of four novels: The Joke's on Me, Drawing Breath, Don't Tell Anyone, and
Sliding Past Vertical. When not playing with the universe of imaginary people
in her head, she enjoys baseball, cooking, reading, and helping aspiring
novelists as a contributing writer and editor for IndiesUnlimited.com. She
lives in New York's lovely Hudson Valley.
Guest Post:
Guest Post:
I’m a bit different from
some authors. Instead of outlining and building a character from scratch, I let
one fall into my head. I follow him or her around as we find the story together.
So sometimes (oh, who am I kidding; it happens nearly all the time) I get to
work with characters who are a little broken, a little damaged, or who don’t
always make the choices I want them to.
This means I often hear
the same comment from my early readers: I
wanted to SLAP her!
If it’s any consolation
to them, sometimes I want to slap her, too.
Yet to write a book any
other way, for me, would feel wrong. It would feel like I’m forcing a character
to do something contrary to his or her nature. Readers can sense this. It can make
the characters’ journeys feel fake, like the author is moving them around on a
chessboard to suit the needs of the plot.
When Sarah Cohen popped
into my head for Sliding Past Vertical,
oh boy, did I want to slap her. Probably more than any of my other heroines.
She meant well. Underneath, I could sense that she meant well, and didn’t want
to hurt anyone, but some of her decisions had unintended consequences because
she wasn’t thinking them through. I really felt for Emerson, who still loved
her after she broke up with him in college. Stop
hurting my book boyfriend, I wanted to yell at her.
But I had to let her do
what she was going to do. That’s one of the most important lessons I learned
from her. As I write a book (and for a while afterward), the characters feel as
real to me as the people I come across in the supermarket, on the train, in the
gym. That’s what a lot of readers say they love about them. Yet real people
don’t always make the best choices, especially if they are in trying situations.
They make the ones that feel like the best thing to do at the time. And knowing
this has not only helped me feel more compassionate toward other people, it’s
helped me feel more compassion for my characters and for myself.
I haven’t always made the
“right” decisions in my personal life. Who has? Through writing, and especially
when I’m given the gift of a character like Sarah, it helps me grow and helps
me learn more about forgiveness.
In a novel, though, if a
character never learns anything or changes in some way because of what she experiences,
well, what’s the point of having her in the book? It’s a question writers often
ask themselves while a story is in development. Sarah, as much as I wanted to sit
her down and talk some sense into her, deserved to stay because she had to go
through a transformation. She had a lot to learn. I had to be compassionate
enough to let her do that on her own, without pushing her around or making her
be someone that she wasn’t. And maybe that’s why she came into my life.
Links
Website http://laurieboris.com
Facebook http://www.facebook.com/laurie.boris.author
Amazon Page http://www.amazon.com/author/laurieboris
Twitter http://www.twitter.com/LaurieBoris
Buy links:
Amazon UK:
http://www.amazon.co.uk/Sliding-Past-Vertical-ebook/dp/B00FD64RL4/
Amazon US:
http://www.amazon.com/Sliding-Past-Vertical-ebook/dp/B00FD64RL4/
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